In essay 1 I believe I could have used better punctuation and a better word choice. I also think I could have better described my story and gave a better image to the reader. But overall I feel my essay was really good and clearly states my thesis.

Mark and James both order there  food at the same time Mark gets his first.

Determine if they’re, their, or there should have been used in the sentence.

Tittles for my essay

life and fire

Tittles for jades essay

• addiction
• silence
• life after death
• resistance
• Lost soul

Throughout life we endure lots of pain and suffering but in order to move on with our lives we must learn from everything. We must not be angry at the world because something bad happened to us because bad things happen to everyone and the people that are truly suffering are the ones who feel bad for themselves and don’t move on. Life is way to short so don’t waste your time because you can never get your time back. The most precious thing in life is time it cannot be bought but only taken from you . so don’t make the mistake of wasting your time.

Time was 9:07 am I casually walk into the mens restroom and planned to do my business unbothered , I go into the stall and i hear a loud bang. The sounds of glass shattering and screams out of fear. The smell of coffee and pancakes floods my mind as i hold the bars in the stall and pray the crooks don’t come in. The taste of my gum becomes flavorless as I chew a million times for minute out of fear.

“We shall keep it,” she said.

“But what about my opinion, does it even matter?” he said

The girl stops and thinks and begins to become emotional.

” It is  my body and my baby .Whether you’re gonna be in our lives, i’m gonna keep it.”

The man beings to open up to the idea as they both wait patiently for the train

” You are right. I truly understand where you are coming from and I’ll be in both of your lives”.

George was hated by most of the village because he was a military man. George didn’t believe the elephant escaped and thought it was all a hoax, he eventually found the elephant and was pressured to kill the animal. He got various opinions on what he should have done whether to kill the elephant or not.

Sole custody is when one parent has guardianship  over their kids, it is ruled by a judge. The boy rode his bike to a safeway where all the clerks know his name. The boy waits at home watching tv  for his father to get off work to bring him a quick meal. The father is a single parent and cant really supervise his son. The father is dependent upon his job to solely support him and his son and is worried about losing his job. He feels all he has is his son and is starting a new life in a different state, he finds it to be a hard journey but him and his son have each other . He seems like he is trying his best to be a father and the best he can be for his son.

Abstract: life is

 

Image: a flame

My name is Victor Silvas  im writing the first part of my draft at my table while listening to future on a very hot evening of September 10, 2018.  Im siting here having drank a mccafe half asleep, barely awake im trying compose some writing so i can get credit for my in class writing . Still tired I stay awake to hear the discussion.