Essay 1 reflection

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In essay 1 I believe I could have used better punctuation and a better word choice. I also think I could have better described my story and gave a better image to the reader. But overall I feel my essay was really good and clearly states my thesis.

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My name is Victor Silvas a recent graduate of 2018 class. Some goals that pertain to me are graduating college and attending college at Sandiego State to study for marine biology. My hobbies include football and basketball and volunteering at my local recreational center.

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